Finally, Draft Three will be posted. Not happy with either the delay or the draft. In some ways, I think it is a step backwards from Draft Two. The main intended change has been organizational, and as with many re-organizations, there's a little more chaos at the beginning of the process, even if the end result is an improvement. I am still hoping for that improvement, but it will have to wait for Drafts Four and Five.
Section 2 of this draft continues to offer an overview of Fosdick and Scott; Transform; Portugal; and California's marijuana initiative. I suspect that the latter two will be excised from future drafts, though mentioned in passing. This draft checks in at 8,253 words; the limit is 10,000.
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